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  1. The crux of your writing while appearing agreeable originally, did not settle properly with me personally after some time. Somewhere throughout the sentences you managed to make me a believer but only for a while. I nevertheless have a problem with your jumps in logic and you might do well to help fill in all those breaks. In the event you can accomplish that, I would definitely end up being amazed.

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